Watchtower
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Post by Watchtower on May 10, 2012 20:04:17 GMT -5
Whenever I try to write, sometimes I end up writing an independent scene. Usually it does not end up in any of my stories, so they stay unwritten. It sometimes helps me out of my writer's block. I will be posting all my independent scenes here.
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avp60685
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Post by avp60685 on May 11, 2012 7:06:09 GMT -5
I love this sis, it's so moving! I love the intro, will Teresa find him? I have written a few stories that were similar where I had twin brothers reunited and they live happily afterwards! I have done fanfictions where the girl finds her long lost father and they start a relationship. It seems like we write very similar things sis and I am so proud of you and keep up the great work!
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Post by mercurytheatre on May 12, 2012 21:16:32 GMT -5
The best writers relate their actual lives. This is very well written and it hits home. Authors struggle for years to find this.....and you have done it in an instant......BRAVO    |
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Post by HarleyQuinn on May 13, 2012 12:58:32 GMT -5
I agree with Timmy. Both of these scenes are very well written. I'd love to see where else you could go with both of these.
I've never tried writing an independant scene. Maybe I should since I've had a writer's block going for MONTHS now.
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avp60685
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Post by avp60685 on May 15, 2012 10:01:59 GMT -5
And always keep a notebook handy! You never know when you'll be inspired!
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avp60685
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Post by avp60685 on May 15, 2012 11:54:58 GMT -5
I pray all works out for you sis! Love your big sis!
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HarleyQuinn
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Post by HarleyQuinn on May 15, 2012 20:10:10 GMT -5
Very nice NiChloe. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this ;D
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avp60685
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Post by avp60685 on May 21, 2012 7:38:10 GMT -5
I love her writings don't you Harley?
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Post by AntiArbitrator on May 22, 2012 10:40:23 GMT -5
Each of the writings has an element of drama that I would enjoy exploring. Would Teresa find her brother and would he be united with the family or would her quest damage her relationship with her parents? All of the writings show strong young women who make decisions based on their caring for others. I enjoy stories about strong women and especially action scenes so all of these would be stories I would enjoy reading. Let's get one excerpt per month expanding each storyline. |
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Post by AntiArbitrator on May 22, 2012 10:56:50 GMT -5
 Looking forward to it. 
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avp60685
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Post by avp60685 on May 22, 2012 11:48:52 GMT -5
YAY! Will any of your characters have friends based on people you know like moon, me, harley, anti, timmy, etc?
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avp60685
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Post by avp60685 on May 22, 2012 12:24:38 GMT -5
just wondered
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